not diary, touga utenafanfic

HELP!

I have a direction for my fanfic, and I've been working on it. But I need help.

It was a chilly fall morning in Otohori Academy. Like she did most mornings, Utena Tenjou was walking to class, waving to her adoring female classmates as she attempted to get in on time. She donned a long pants version of her famous boy's uniform with her hair simply falling about her head and shoulders, barely combed. As she aimlessly strolled into the garden, she saw a strange sight. Touga was running. "Hmm, that's odd," Utena thought to herself as she stared at Touga running through the halls, his red hair feathering behind him as he darted about. "Touga rarely seems to be in much of a rush... Something must be wrong." Utena's concern for Touga, and humans in general, overwhelmed her and she shouted out, "Kirryu-sama!" With that Touga stopped in his tracks and completely lost his composure. "Tenjou-san, Come with me!" He shouted as he ran over to Utena and grabbed her by the arm, and began to run toward the gates of the academy.

"What the hell is wrong with you, Mr. President? Get your hands off of me!" Touga got his wits about him, and suddenly blurted out, "You must come with me today, I have a drivers exam. I cannot fail, and you will be my good luck charm." Utena stared at him, raising one eyebrow and wrinkling her nose--- "What?" She exclaimed as she shook her head back and forth. Surely he has >lost his mind. "There aren't any good luck pieces to exams, you have to study, Touga. Get away from me." With that, she turned on her toes and began to walk away. "Utena-sama," Touga said in a desperate tone, "This is very important to me," he said as he reached his hand out to her shoulder and gently pulled her back towards him. Utena looked over in his direction and gazed into his soul-penetrating eyes. "I need to be able to drive my own car, and I cannot do this without your help," he pleaded as he placed his other hand on her chin, and caressed her cheek. Utena turned her head away from his hand and reluctantly gave into his request. "Fine." She said. "But if I get in trouble for missing class, you have to deal with Akio-san." Touga nodded and smiled wryly, bowing his head to her as he almost whispered, "As you wish, princess." Utena growled under her breath and followed Touga outside of the academy gates.

As they exited the gates Utena looked back at the academy, wondering if Anthy would be alright without her throughout an entire day of school. Sayonji hadn't been in the best of moods lately. Well, he never was, but Utena worried beside the fact. While she was looking behind her, Touga guided Utena down the street, avoiding obstacles and keeping her out of the way of passers-by, who stared at the two of them and made comments as they passed. "Oh, those children should be in school." One grimaced. "But don't they make a lovely couple?" asked the other. Touga smiled devilishly at the woman making that comment. "Playboy," she stated as she walked away. Touga stopped walking at the corner, and stood impatiently by the curb. "Why did you stop walking?" Utena asked once she realized that she had stopped moving. "We have to get to the DMV somehow, Utena-san," Touga said as he winked at her. Utena started thinking about what was going on. "What in the world could be wrong with Touga? We're just standing here." she thought. "Utena san," Touga said softly, as he raised his hands to her midriff and positioned his body in front of hers, a bit closer than Utena would have preferred. She turned her head slowly away from him, as Touga leaned his face toward her ear, breathing gently while his long sparkling hair tickled her neck. "We have to," he slowly stated. Utena nodded slowly as though she was acting like she understood what he was getting at, but didn't. "We have to," he continued, raising his hand to her cheek, "take the bus.""What?" Utena exhaled, grabbing and tossing his hand away from her face. Utena, up to this point in her life, had never had a reason to ride the bus. "Here it comes, Utena-sama." Touga smiled, "brace yourself."A large bus screeched its breaks toward the two of them and pulled to a sudden halt. Utena had quite a confused look on her face as Touga stood back from the creaking doors of the bus and extended his hand into the door, inviting her to enter first. She raised an eyebrow, as she thought to herself, "Well, I did promise I'd go..." as she reluctantly took Touga's invite onto the old, rusting bus. Touga stepped in directly behind her and rummaged through his pocket for some change. He pulled some out, and began to count it, placing some into the fare box.

Utena walked to the back of the bus and took a seat. Touga walked to the back of the bus, and sat next to her. She looked him up and down fairly quickly and scooted a few inches away from him. Touga instantly noticed this and asked her, "Do I make you uncomfortable, Utena san?" As he said this he ever so softly placed his hand on her knee. Utena swallowed, and said, "Well, no. I just know how you are, is all. I am not really attracted to you." "Really?" Touga inquired as he gazed out of the window longingly. "I think that you're lying to yourself, Utena. You wouldn't be as uncomfortable as you are if you truly had no feelings for me." Utena looked over at him with yet another confused look on her face and inhaled to reply to him and he held a finger against his lips, and blew gently, shushing her. She grimaced, and closed her mouth. Touga then removed his hand from her knee by sliding his hand up her leg to her mid-thigh, and placing his hand back in his own lap. Utena lowered her head a bit and looked down at the spot on her knee that Touga's hand had rested.

"Ah," Touga said, standing up, and reaching over Utena's head to ring the driver alert bell, "Here we are!" Utena looked up from the spot she had been staring at and directed her attention out of the windows of the bus. "There's nothing here Touga," Utena said looking back and forth while Touga began exiting the bus. "Wait!" She shouted, running off the bus after him.

Touga walked into the Department of Motor Vehicles

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A-ko and B-ko suddnely shouted, "I wonder, I wonder, do you know what I wonder?!"

"Kogai, Kogai, Kogai!" A-ko shouted.

"I need to get my drivers licence today!!" announced B-ko.

"Well then get goin!" A-ko shouted back as she tossed a steering wheel at her.

B-ko responded, "But I don't want to learn alone...."

"Is driving a two person sport?" Asked A-ko.

"OF COURSE....." B-ko began to shout, but she corrected herself..."of course it is. I can't be alone. My driving force is you!"

A-ko stood on her heels and looked shocked, "ME? ME? ME!?! I've never driven before! I can't teach you a thing... I'm afraid of cars..." A-ko began to snivel.

B-ko responded to her "I already know how to drive, I just need you there with me to get my licence."

"Oh," Said A-ko.

Suddenly B-ko asked, "Hey! Where'd you get the steering wheel from, then?"......

Both:

"I wonder I wonder, do you know what I wonder?"

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Utena opened her tired eyes and slowly focused in on the room around her. "Oh, Himemeya," she sighed, "I had the strangest dream, and it didn't seem to make any sense at all." Utena looked over to the other half of the bed, and it was empty. "Hmmm," she wondered, "Where is she?" Slowly, Utena rolled over in the bed to get out and as she moved her hand from underneath her pillow, she felt warmth, perhaps it was warmth from a body. "Oh, Anthy," Utena thought to herself, "did you finally get tired of sleeping alone when you're so close to someone else?" Shutting her eyes almost like she was about to go back to sleep, Utena rolled over and draped an arm over the body that laid next to her. As she laid her arm down, Utena realized that this body was certainly not that of a woman. She felt muscle tone, and square shoulders, and a firm chest once she placed her hand across the breast of the body laying to her right. Utena began to panic. "Oh god," She thought as she could feel her face growing warm, and her neck prickling with cold spurts, "Akio-san."

Utena took in a deep breath, and the only sent she could take in was that of a crisp, clean, soap. "He doesn't smell of roses," she whispered aloud. Suddenly the body rolled around to face her, and Utena began to break out in a cold sweat and got a case of the blushes. She tightened her eyelids to prevent any chance of light coming into her eyes and a hand softly laid itself on her cheek. Utena's worrying had made her quite warm, and the hand was a bit cold in comparison to her cheek. She relaxed just a bit and smiled. Then she felt the body moving closer to her. Perhaps it was another hand... Perhaps it was